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To: MVillanueva@delriohospital.org
Bcc: JulieDelaney@gmail.com
Subject: Nursing Position Acceptance from Jack Delaney
Dear Ms. Villanueva:
I am pleased to accept the position of registered nurse in the obstetrics unit of Del Rio Hospital, at the salary of $68,500. A starting date of March 17 works well for me.
I have attached a scan of my Associate Degree in Nursing certification. It is from Lone Star Technical College, which you can learn about at this link: lonestartechcollege.edu.
I’m looking forward to caring for the patients of Del Rio beginning March 17.
Yours sincerely,
Jack Delaney
Attachment: JackDelaneyNursingCertification.pdf
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