Are You Caught in a Comma Pickle?

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February 5, 2020 

Are You Caught in a Comma Pickle?

“How can one little punctuation mark create such a vast and ugly divide between loved ones?”

— Melia Dicker

A fellow eTips subscriber recently asked us to clarify a common comma conundrum: I'm never sure when to place a comma before the word "and."

It’s a crucial question. Studies suggest and is the third most used word in English.

As a conjunction, and connects words, phrases, clauses, or sentences. Sometimes those connections require a comma, and other times they don’t.

When should I use a comma before and?

Add the comma in these situations:

1. Use a comma before and to separate two parts that could stand alone as sentences.

Sophia nominated Julie, and Rob seconded.

Without the comma, you might at first think Sophia nominated two people.

Sophia nominated Julie and Rob seconded.

That’s why you need a comma and a conjunction (and, but, or, nor, for, so, yet) when you combine two sentences into one. The comma helps readers know where one idea ends and another begins. If the and separates two parts that could stand alone as sentences, add a comma. If not, leave it out.

2. Use a comma when and connects the last item in a series of three or more ideas.

Fewer meetings would save time, increase productivity, and boost morale.

The final comma in the series is called the serial or Oxford comma. This little mark is a big point of contention in the writing world (and also at family dinners). Most leading style guides recommend the serial comma; but others, like AP Style, omit it. 

We believe the serial comma is the safer, clearer choice. Leaving it out can cause confusion, sometimes to amusing effect.

I went to happy hour with Maddy, a colleague and a dog. (Your colleague is a dog named Maddy?)

The sandwiches included bacon and tomato, peanut butter and jelly and pickle and olive. (So do the options include a peanut butter and jelly and pickle sandwich, or a jelly and pickle and olive sandwich?)

When should I not use a comma before and?

Remove the comma in these situations:

1. Do not use commas when all the items in a series are connected with and.

Fewer meetings would save time and increase productivity and boost morale.

2. Do not use a comma between compound subjects or predicates.

The contractor and the city inspector examined the lateral sewer.
(NOT The contractor, and the city inspector examined the lateral sewer.)

We started the van and discovered a problem.
(NOT We started the van, and discovered a problem.)

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Play the Editor!

Copy the following memo into a document. Correct the missing and misused commas. Scroll down to see our recommendation.

Subject: Promotion of Mona Veal to Full-Time Graphic Artist

For the past 18 months, Mona Veal has done outstanding work as a part-time graphic artist in our Marketing Department and I recommend that she be promoted to full-time status. The promotion is warranted for two reasons:

  1. Throughout the past 18 months, Mona has demonstrated those traits that Slenk Manufacturing most values in its graphic artists: creativity, dependability and the ability to work well with others. 
  2. Our four full-time, and two part-time graphic artists completed their projects on time last year. However, Allison Christian in Accounting tells me that the full-time employees averaged 3.5 hours of overtime per week throughout the year. Given that fact, our new contract with Lee-Mar Industries will soon put a strain on both the group and our budget. 
If you approve the promotion, please sign, and return this memo.
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Check out the Write for Business Guide for more help with commas and other forms of punctuation.

Bonus: What questions do you have about writing or grammar? We're happy to help. Send comments to etips@thoughtfullearning.com. 
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Editor’s Recommendations

Subject: Promotion of Mona Veal to Full-Time Graphic Artist

For the past 18 months, Mona Veal has done outstanding work as a part-time graphic artist in our Marketing Department, and I recommend that she be promoted to full-time status. The promotion is warranted for two reasons:

  1. Throughout the past 18 months, Mona has demonstrated those traits that Slenk Manufacturing most values in its graphic artists: creativity, dependability, and the ability to work well with others. 
  2. Our four full-time and two part-time graphic artists completed their projects on time last year. However, Allison Christian in Accounting tells me that the full-time employees averaged 3.5 hours of overtime per week throughout the year. Given that fact, our new contract with Lee-Mar Industries will soon put a strain on both the group and our budget. 

If you approve the promotion, please sign and return this memo.