February 12, 2019

Mr. Felix Grove

Sea-to-Mountain Landscapers

8900 Coast Road

Seattle, WA 98134-6508

Dear Mr. Grove:

Opening: Buffer: Specify the bid and thank the bidder. SUBJECT: Bid 4459 Everson City Park

Thank you for your bid to design and develop Everson’s eight-acre city park adjacent to Kingston Elementary School and the Nooksack River.

Middle: Highlight the reader’s strengths objectively, but specify why another bid won. Your bid was competitive for several of the criteria outlined in our original Request for Proposals (RFP). Your cost estimates, experience, and references were as strong as those from other bidders. However, Earth-Scape Design’s overall plan tipped the bid in their favor. By including a variety of native plant species, Earth-Scape’s natural, sustainable landscape will require less long-term care and create less stress on the Nooksack watershed. Because their plan contained a variety of plants, it also offered added educational value.

Closing: If appropriate, encourage bidding on future projects. The Planning and Development Committee appreciates the work that you put into your proposal. We look forward to your interest in future Everson projects.

Yours sincerely,

Alice Potter

Development Committee Chair

June 17, 2019

Confirmation of email sent on June 14, 2019.

Mr. Jamaal Ellison

Southeast Electric

1976 Boulder Road, Suite 1214

Charlotte, NC 28261-1203

Dear Mr. Ellison:

Opening: Buffer: Restate the problem and show concern. We have finished investigating your concerns about the ATV16 drives that you installed for American Linc Company. We do understand that the drive and serial-link failures have inconvenienced both you and American Linc.

Middle: Use sound evidence and state the claim denial clearly. After testing the drives you returned, our line engineer determined that they failed because the temperatures in the cabinet exceeded the maximum operating temperature of the drives, leading to electronic-component failure. As noted in the ATV16 manual, the drive may malfunction under such conditions. For this reason, we cannot repair the drives without charge. Offer helpful alternatives. We would be happy, however, to consider the following solutions:

1. We could remove the drive’s plastic cover and install a stirring fan in the enclosure to moderate the temperature.

2. We could replace the ATV16 drives with the ATV18 model, a model more suitable for the machine you are using. (If you choose this option, we would give you a 15 percent discount on the ATV18s.)

Closing: Focus on the next step and on future business. Please let me know how you would like to proceed. I look forward to hearing from you and to continuing our partnership.

Yours sincerely,

Elaine Hoffman

Product Manager

February 26, 2019

BHC Office Supply Company

39 Davis Street

Pittsburgh, PA 15209-1334

ATTENTION: Shipping Manager

Opening: Buffer: Establish the claim’s context. I’m writing about a problem with the purchase order #07-1201. Copies of the original PO plus two invoices are enclosed.

Middle: Tactfully spell out the facts. Here is the sequence of events concerning PO 07-1201:

Dec. 17, 2018:	I faxed the original purchase order.
Jan. 8, 2019:	Because I hadn’t heard from your office, I spoke with Kim in customer service. Then I re-sent the PO because she could not find the original in your system.
Jan. 15, 2019:	I received a partial shipment, with the remaining items back-ordered (invoice 0151498).
Point out results of the problem in a neutral tone. Jan. 22, 2019:	I then received a second shipment that was complete (invoice 0151511). Noting the duplication, I contacted Kim, and she cancelled the back-ordered items.

Specify the adjustment that you want. I am returning the partial order (duplicate items) by UPS. Please credit our account for the following: (1) the duplicate items listed on invoice 0151498 ($863.85), (2) the shipping costs of the partial order ($69.20), and (3) the UPS costs to return the duplicate items ($58.10). The total credit comes to $991.15.

Closing: Anticipate future business. I look forward to receiving an adjusted statement and to continued cooperation in the future.

Gary Sheridan—Office Manager

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January 15, 2019

Mr. Steven Grinnel

Director of Operations

Industrial Aggregate Equipment Company

4018 Tower Road

Albuquerque, NM 87105-3443

Dear Mr. Grinnel:

Opening: Buffer: Specify the problem and the reason for concern. I am very concerned about the 40-foot Snorkel Lift that we contracted with you to rebuild when we traded in our old Marklift. Continued delays in the rebuilding schedule and subsequent problems with the lift itself leave me uncertain about Industrial Aggregate’s ability to provide Rankin Technologies with continued service.

Middle: Provide a detailed outline of the problem and its history. Here is an overview of the problem:

1. We ordered the Snorkel Lift in April 2018, and you promised delivery in July. We did not receive the lift until September.

2. Keep your tone neutral. When the lift arrived, we noticed several key parts had not been replaced, and the boom did not operate correctly. Your project supervisor, Nick Luther, assured us that the parts would be fixed in a timely manner, and he provided a substitute lift for free.

3. Two months later, Mr. Luther called to say that everything was fixed. However, when we visited your facility on December 18, the gauges and tires on the lift had not been replaced, and the dual fuel unit had not been installed.

4. Be specific and factual. When we finally received the Snorkel Lift on December 22, several items we noticed on December 18 still had not been fixed. In fact, the lift still had these deficiencies:

   • several oil leaks

   • missing “on/off” switch in the basket

   • no dual fuel capabilities

   • boom vibration when retracted after full extension

May 5, 2019

Ms. Mary-Lou Twain

780 East 41st Street, Apartment 712

Houston, TX 77022-1183

Dear Ms. Twain:

Opening: Buffer: Express appreciation for the application. Thank you for meeting with loan officer Jean Olms last Friday and applying for a loan to open your gift shop.

When we review an application, one of the factors that we consider is the applicant’s credit history. A good credit history shows a pattern of paying obligations. Middle: Provide objective reasons for the rejection. Then state the rejection and offer suggestions.At this time, because you have not established a credit history, we cannot approve your request to borrow $200,000. However, you can establish a good credit history in one of two ways:

• Apply for, use, and make prompt payments on a credit card.

• Take out and repay a smaller loan at Lone Star Bank. Just a $5,000 loan successfully repaid would establish a positive financial record.

Closing: If appropriate, encourage applying when conditions change. We hope that these suggestions will help you begin to establish a good credit history. Then you may reapply for the loan that you requested.

Sincerely,

Rodney Thayer

President

RT/BJH

P.S. Please see the reverse side of this letter for information about your rights under the Federal Equal Credit Opportunity Act and other relevant laws.

January 15, 2019

Policy 46759

Ms. Virginia Beloit

72 Elias Street

Washington, DC 20018-8262

Dear Ms. Beloit:

Opening: Buffer: Introduce the topic and its context. Periodically, insurance companies review their policies, assess the cost of offering the policies, and make changes where needed. When that happens, it’s my responsibility as an insurance agent to inform my clients and help them make necessary adjustments.

Middle: Give rationale for the change. Last week Hawkeye Casualty, the company with whom you have your auto insurance policy, discontinued all policies for drivers considered “high risk.” Because you have had a traffic accident within the past 12 months and have received two speeding tickets during the same period, the company has relabeled your status as “high risk.” State the change. If possible, offer help. As a result, Hawkeye Casualty has cancelled your auto-insurance policy effective January 31, 2019. However, I have found another company that will offer you auto insurance. While the cost of this new policy is somewhat higher than your present policy, the coverage is comparable, and the company is reliable.

Closing: Explain what the reader should do. Please call me at 612-489-0020 within the next week so we can discuss the situation and decide how to proceed.

Sincerely,

Eric Wright

EW/RN

March 25, 2019

Mr. Gavin Farnsworth

Miami Computer Enterprises

Box 115

South Benton Mall

Miami, FL 33166-1217

Dear Gavin:

Opening: Buffer: Show appreciation. Thank you for your proposal that I join your Customer Training Department. I appreciate your confidence in my ability to provide Miami Computer Enterprises’ clients with instruction and technical support.

Middle: Give your reasons objectively, stress positives in the proposal, state the rejection tactfully, and explore other options. While considering your proposal, I reflected on the reasons that I started my own computer-consulting service two years ago. One of the reasons was flexibility. As an independent consultant, I could regulate my work activities around family demands. Although your proposal was financially attractive, I must turn down your offer, at least for now.

In 17 months (August 2020), my youngest child will enter grade school. If you are still interested in me at that time, I would be happy to reconsider your proposal. Until then, I hope you will want me to continue doing contract projects for MCE, especially with your Spanish-speaking clients.

Closing: End positively. Thanks again for your generous proposal. I wish MCE continued growth and success.

Yours sincerely,

Juanita Guiverra

April 16, 2019

Ms. Marlis DeQuincey

Executive Director

Family First Center

468 Provis Way

Fairfield, NY 12377-2089

Opening: Buffer: Express interest in the reader’s cause.Dear Ms. DeQuincey:

I read with interest your letter about Family First Center’s project. Your efforts to build a shelter for women and children victimized by domestic violence is certainly commendable.

Middle: Provide clear reasons for not participating. I am honored that you have invited Rankin Technologies to participate in your project. Rankin seeks to be a good corporate citizen and a positive force in the community. To that end, we have already committed ourselves to partnerships with nonprofit organizations that mesh with Rankin’s interests in the environment, in urban renewal, and in Third-World development. State the refusal tactfully. For this reason, we cannot participate in your project at this time.

If possible, offer an alternative. Rankin employees will, however, be encouraged to continue to support your work in the community campaign. In fact, I will distribute materials about your project to our employees so that individuals may choose to get involved.

Closing: Affirm the reader. I wish you well, Ms. DeQuincey, in your important work of helping the victims of physical and emotional violence in this community.

Yours sincerely,

Barbara Reinholdt

Office Manager

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